Archive Version of Illuminaria
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This story is having a serious overhaul. The new version is here: Illuminaria - Version 2 I had to take a break from writing for personal reasons, and when I came back, I found I didn't really like where I had ended up. Additionally, rereading the tale from the beginning, I saw a bunch of areas where I could have done things much better. Reader comments were especially help in pointing out choices I made that were not appreciated. The result is I am starting back at chapter 1 and rewriting. While there will be many ideas and even sections carried forward into the new version, there will be some significant changes as well. I will start posting the new chapters before the end of the year. I do apologize for vanishing from the community with no warning or explanation.